Really like the draft. the patterns used on the blue header and the grey strip are fantastic. However, although the buttons used on the header work, the smaller versions with circular edges (like semi circle not rounded!) dont work as well. Id suggest plainer buttons with out the inner glow (if you used that to give it the shiny effect). I'd definitely choose the top version over the bottom version, but I also feel the logo needs work on. the style youve done it in is not up to date with graphic trends and without taking offence (all critisism is good) looks slightly tacky, which would be the main downfall of the page. Hope this is of any help!
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